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Extreme

Oh man, that was EXTREME!

It would've been better if you didn't loop it though at the end, and made a "The End" screen, or something... To give the audience the time to absorb that action packed ending!

A BBQish update!

Awesome! Just awesome. Sad thing is I didn't even expect it coming and you highly overuse that joke. =P

But it never dies when you do it. Man, BBQbeefburgerman sure is awesome!

I'm really excited to see you FINALLY have a collection page up! Makes me happy. =P

Keep up the good work!

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Thank you.

Im gonna refresh up with my jokes a bit soon i hope.

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If you were aware your movie contained horrible grammar... Why did you leave it in? Do you think it's funny?

It's not.

It's missing...

WHAT!? NO FORCED LAME COMMENTARY ABOUT ICE CREAM!?

You kinda forgot that part!

Sort of...

I 3'd it anyway... I think.

Awesome!

I can't believe I didn't discover this animation sooner! That was awesome!

You know, at first I was thinking "You can manually submit content to the portal if it goes over the limit" but I think the "To be continued..." thing works quite well with this!

Haha, I love crazy rambling old people humor. =P

Keep up the good work!

Hott

That female Ronald McDonald is hott.

I 10'd it for violence because Mr.T pities the foo' who doesn't vote 10 on violence when he stars in something!

5'd

This again?

I remember you submitting this, or something almost exactly similar to this... Awhile back...

Why did you even try again? You should've put more effort into it. All it was, was random, poorly animated violence. Fight scenes were cool and all but...

Yea... no.

That was horrible.

You have a great concept for a movie, but that was pretty horrible. I'm not saying this because I dislike sprite animations... no no, I'm saying it's horrible for a large variety of reasons.

Cons:

1. The text, was the most horrid, horrible thing I have ever witnessed. Do you, and other people who do this, realize that putting large blocks of text without any border, or background shading, is THE WORST POSSIBLE THING YOU CAN DO? What exactly is up with that? Why do people think that looks good? It doesn't!

2. Spelling & Grammar: You seriously need to learn how to spell and use the english language correctly. I saw SO many spelling mistakes, and A LOT of grammatical mistakes. A good thing to do before publishing a movie, is to read it over and make sure you at least made it... legible. I mean, did you even WATCH your own movie before publishing it? I know plenty of 5 year olds who could quickly catch your horrid mistakes. If english isn't your first language, that's understandable, but there are still plenty of internet resources out there for you to check with before uploading your creation with the rest of the world.

3. Unstable Images: I constantly saw unstable panning, zooming, tweening, etc. All of a sudden the whole world would change it's proportion... This, also happened whenever new text would pop-up. I might be wrong, but I'm to assume you're using Vcam? Please, for the love of overused Super Saiyen Mario sprites... PLEASE learn how to use the Vcam properly. I suggest you ask Logo, I hear he uses the Vcam quite frequently, he must be an expert since he boasts about it a lot. I mean, he can multitask eating ice cream and using the Vcam properly... and you can't?

4. Add better music. Adjust it's quality as well. It seemed like you stuck whole chunks of soundtracks in there but only used a small portion of them. Your filesize is huge, it shouldn't be that huge for an animation like that.

5. Use sprites correctly: Please use the sprites correctly. Also, for example, don't show an image of Hyrule Castle from "A Link to the Past" then show what seems to be a crappy version of the final Temple from ZeldaII. That just doesn't make sense... Also, if a Goomba is walking, make it walk, not just tween....

Pros:

1. Good concept for a story. An evil entity taking over the Realm of Nintendo? Probably not the most original idea, but it's rarely been done. You seemed to have put a lot time into this, and you have a good grasp of what you want done and how you want to play it out. I'd like to see more of this animation, but not in it's current form, and not until you fix most of the issues I just mentioned.

I hope you noticed, you have more Cons than Pros. Your heart's in the right place for this animation, which is why most people like it, but... It just needs a great deal of work. Don't take my negative criticism badly, I didn't HATE the animation, I just thought it was pretty horrible and needs a LOT of work done with it... A LOT. Like I said, don't take it badly.... Take my feedback and apply it to your animation! It'll do you good!

Beautiful!

Very beautiful, and well animated! I loved it, you have brightened up my day, because I saw something very deep, and creative submitted to Newgrounds, when I was just about to give up hope after watching various stick figures...

I hope this gets the front page or something!

Haha!

Oh wow, I didn't expect that at the end. That was hilarious! FIEVED!

Ages ago, I submitted my first flash. I'm not sure whatever happened to it, but that's okay, because it was horrible. Several years later, I submitted a slightly less horrible flash. ...And now I'm back... submitting more terrible animations!

Age 39, Male

Easton, MA

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